My Love Poem by Angelica Maxfield

My Love

Rating: 5.0


Will you marry me?
As I see you sitting in the park your lookin up,
I thought, I woundered what he's thinking.
So I made my way over to him and asked
'Mind if I join? '

As I wanted to get to know you more
I started off saying me name.
Then we both came eye to eye and
asked each other questions.
The more we were answering, the last
on that I had was
'Will you marry me? '

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 29 April 2008

I've never quite seen that written in such a clear direct way. Most interesting and creative. I gave it a ten for creativity. GW62

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