My Love Hakiu Poem by Steven Iceberg

My Love Hakiu

Rating: 4.2


Can't find words to say
Completely sweeped off my feet
Can last forever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sathyanarayana M V S 20 April 2009

Good juxtaposing of feelings. Good haiku, It's different

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Ketia Brown 06 April 2009

cheezy man soooo cheezy

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