My Mother's Poem 2 Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

My Mother's Poem 2

Rating: 5.0


A Prayer

Dear Lord, my daddy's coming home.
Please, when you greet him, take him by the hand
And lead him where his love so long has waited,
And let them walk together in the land.
If there be gardens in that heavenly realm,
Please let him have a little spot to tend.
His gentle hands which toiled for years unceasing
Could not be idle. All who called him friend
Know with what tenderness he tilled the earth,
And gloried in its annual rebirth.
Please let him know how very much we loved him,
And help us, Lord, that we might ever be
As honest, patient, kind and uncomplaining
Or even half as wonderful as he.

My Mother's Poem 2
Tuesday, December 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: death,families,family,father,father daughter,fathers,life,life and death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem was written by my mother upon hearing of the death of her father. If I remember correctly, she wrote it on the train as she was traveling to the funeral. I have always loved the poem and thought she did a great job with it. She was probably the first one to inspire me to like poetry.

Submitted about 5: 23 p.m.15 Dec 2015. I discovered later that it had lost the picture and the poet's note.

Second try: 6: 39 p.m.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 25 December 2015

To protect the family. Nice work.

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Wes Vogler 18 December 2015

My mom and dad have been gone many a year but are still thought of with love and admiration. I am happy to hear that you had great ones as well. They were childhood sweethearts as are me and mine (165 years and counting) I just thought Mom 97 Dad 78 total 165 for them too (oh-oh!)

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Spock The Vegan 15 December 2015

The ones that come from the heart are always the best.10 points. TFS

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