My Poor Mirror Poem by tabasom azadee

Very imaginative write, sad and full of passion. You write well! 10+

But I never listen to you about your past and your future Your heart is broken the same as me I never clean you even when you clean my heart from pain And told me about golden dawn after black night I'm so sorry my old mirror...... wonderful imagination...the fact that you are able to see that the old mirror is lively there........ and how says sorry to your old mirror who always showed you in the mirror........ lovely imagaination dear poetess. fine. thank u. tony

(cont.) i suggest: use I'm, not I m or Im, and about, not a bout. and instead of...front you, i suggest in front of you. and don't, not dont. but maybe not using apostrophes is part of your signature poetic style? ? actually, you use NO PUNCTUATION, which sometimes makes my reading 'job' more difficult. but reading this poem, the lack of punctuation barely bothered me. bri :)

i don't care much, nor use much [not purposely at least] symbolism, so......i like to think (that) you are actually talking about a mirror: a glass reflecting surface. and i like that you are, if you are, talking to a mirror, though you do treat the mirror as an animate object, with feelings. and i like that also. to MyPoemList. (cont.)