My Raindrops Poem by ANJALI SINHA

My Raindrops

Rating: 4.7


Easy breezy
downpour rain,
see you in a distant.
Over hilltops, treetops,
rooftops, cheektops,
and over the seas.
Make it sweet,
the rains first fall,
sunlit from heavens
like first dew fall.

Eden saw play,
crooning sadness
setaceousily as you come.
Wash away,
cumulus sorrows,
singing gladness.

Oh! ! insouciant raindrops,
art thou so pure?
moody and mild,
but sometimes wild,
you sometimes child.
Love thee, fear thee,
everywhere you go,
garnering secrets that
nobody knows.

05-10-08
ANJALI

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 20 October 2008

good poem...drizzling sweet...'setaciously'- a typo there...needs edit...10

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Ravi Sathasivam 06 November 2008

It's a beautifully expressed poem. I like it. Thanks for sharing with me

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Great Poem. It brings a soothing calmness to me!

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Anjali Chandra 20 November 2008

what a pretty poem i love it

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 21 December 2008

lovely! I feel it's better if we listen to Chopin's Raindropp Prelude while we read this cute poem. keep writing!

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Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 20 February 2010

Fantastic vocabulary.... wow! Best words in best order that make your poem always and always...

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Raindrops that runs and rushes into a rich, refreshing river. Thanks for sharing my friend.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 04 October 2009

the freshness of the rain you brought in your lines... lovely...10

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Soumyendu Biswas 20 July 2009

Its far better than mine, Anjali, because this is so light and crisp and there's a frisky air about it, a happy exuberance, an all pervading jubilation about being alive...

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Nikunj Sharma 09 July 2009

U kiss my cheeks As I look at the pregnant sky The glow on ur face Matched the shine of my eye Don't go away, lil raindrop For u I hv seen, mother earth cry.... Anjali...ur poems are eternal,

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