My Reply To A Disappointed Friend... Poem by Raihana Abdul Jabbar

My Reply To A Disappointed Friend...

Rating: 3.5


Why the road so dire?
Why follow the fire?
Why vociferate endlessly?
You have unpredictable power! ! !

Allow not tears to conquer you,
Allow not ur blood to dry up....
Keep it live......
Alight with that powerful fire.....

Achieve ur desire....
Leave behind the haunted roads....
And look forward....
To the enlightened destination.....

Lend your ears to the music of life...
Tune it to fit the ring of change...
For changes always happen...
Flow with the right, as brave as ever...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 23 April 2009

good advice you give to your friend, Raihana...powerful words full of positiveness inside...good piece...thanks...10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 08 October 2008

yea, the reply is significant. well penned........10+

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Ben Gieske 02 October 2008

A worthwhile message of advice. A good way to begin a poem. The questions grab the attention of the reader right away. You show some originality with “ring of change” and “flow with the right”. Again you use just the right amount of words to express your thoughts which helps the action flow quickly.

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C T Heart 29 September 2008

Fine advice, it gives a light. Thanks for sharing.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 29 September 2008

A nice composition. Love it.

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