My Sacrifice Poem by Mpho Nkadimeng

My Sacrifice

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A sacrifice
Is the compartment
Of my limited infinity
Lounging ardorned moments
With you
To you
Relieving spaces with your presence
Emasculating the logic I am
Without you
Freezing fleeting steps
Minds harbour
Reckoning spaces stars take to form constellations
To deprive vision off its beauty
A sacrifice
The dearing
Thought of misconception
In deep panels of criticism
With a twig of grass
Baring the light of your trust
Hoping for your rainbow
To light for more of my infinity
I compart to a blissful mirage
Of your happiness
And dare to call it love

Monday, September 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Walkerjohn 07 September 2015

Aloha Mpho... Beautifully penned is this ode to one... a few lines short of perfection... with just a bit of study and a final edit this could be that post to return to with solemn thoughts of such a perfection... well done and I thank you for sharing your worth through your words to the all of US... all of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two

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