Theodora (Theo) Onken

Freshman - 519 Points (Washington State)

My Seattle~ - Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

It was a Seattle mist that fell here today
Swallowed up by the states giant size and parched ground
A desert of a place on the edge of the Panhandle
It left me longing for Mt. Rainer and Puget Sound;

Where miles and miles of flat land & oil wells make up the scenery
Where the lakes and their water are a muddy- red
Where Rattle snakes & Scorpions take up residency
It's like Hell- almost- like sleeping in the Devils bed;

But it was a Seattle mist that fell here today
So unlike the sizzling sun that usually comes 'round
Baking the land & our skin into beyond done
Making me long even more for Mt. Rainer & Puget Sound;

For Lake Washington and the Space Needle
For fresh seafood instead of a Texas steak
For Woodland Park Zoo & the Public Market
For the ever true blue colour of my favorite lake;

It was a Seattle mist that fell here today
Making me realize just what my heart has known all along
Home is truly where ones heart's abides
And from m heart- i will always sing- my Seattle song;


B, Theodora Onken

April 4,2013


Poet's Notes about The Poem

The misting chilly weather here in Texas today and sweet memories of my home- sweet- home...Seattle

Comments about My Seattle~ by Theodora (Theo) Onken

  • Freshman - 519 Points Theodora Onken (4/22/2013 5:09:00 PM)

    Gajanan and Diane- ithank you both very much for taking the time to read and comment. You are so appreciated. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,811 Points Diane Hine (4/22/2013 5:18:00 AM)

    I enjoyed the structure of the poem which really conveyed your feelings beautifully. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 31,578 Points Gajanan Mishra (4/4/2013 1:43:00 AM)

    home is where ones heart abides. good poem. thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 4, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, October 11, 2013


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