My Secret Poem by Jhane Reyes

My Secret

Rating: 4.3


I start to scream and cry
Such a fool willing to die
Why this life is full of lie
It’s a nightmare I can't deny

I have a secret that hard to tell
I’m afraid to shout and reveal
Dilemma and misery draw in the air
It brings a trouble to those I care

A box of madness and bunch of fear
I’m not that strong to accept and bear
Revenge would make me feel better
But I know it’s not the answer....

Though it makes me live in dim
And left a doubt, fright and pain........
Close those eyes and zip the mouth
Just the secret won’t let out

I willing to face those grim and fret
To die and bury with my secret
Than to see everything goes into worse
Its’ not easy but it’s my choice

To cure the wounded soul and life ruined
Forgive and forget are my medicine
The healing process be friend in writing
And in words of God I learned to cling

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maricel Martinez 25 August 2008

hi cousin dear ur poem is full of secret, mind to tell me what's this...nice poem! thanks MM

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Greenwolfe 1962 21 August 2008

The reading of this piece was really difficult. That was because the writing did not have the ability to flow from one word to another. It was completely disorganized. The writer could do much better with much more time. GW62

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Ency Bearis 16 August 2008

a nice write again..i know it is a secret..but you did it well a secret...lovely.. Ency Bearis

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