My Souls Journey Poem by ritty patnaik

My Souls Journey



in the deapth of my prayer,
i tried to touch your soul, with my,
yearning for you.

seeking liberation from
the body trap,
the pain of endless travel,
through the tunnel of life.
leaves me with empty hopes of
happy tomorrows.

my faith still is endless'because i see'a
candle,
at the end of the tunnel.

beckoning me,
to trudge, on the path of truth!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Nandy 18 July 2009

A nice poem! 10! Reading about near death experiences; it is has been narrated that after death the soul leaves the body 'as if travelling through a tunnel' and encounters 'bright light' at the end of the tunnel! Fritjof Capra in his -'The Tao of Physics' explains spirituality through simple Physics! This tunnel could be a 'White Hole', - opposite of a Black Hole, through which it is possible to travel to a Parallel Universe! In the Book of Genesis, God, after creating heaven & earth, created LIGHT! The BuddhistS donot believe in re-birth as such! Life like a candle flame, gets blown out, and that's the end! ? I have written on all these aspects. -Raj

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Saadat Tahir 08 June 2009

ritty...very well written done with reverance and belief gret poem cheers

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