Naive(Fear Of The Unknown) Poem by Thomas Henk

Naive(Fear Of The Unknown)

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Trying to remember
The last thing you said;
But for everytime I tried,
I have always failed.

I wish I could fill
Every silence with your voice.
As a punctuation or better still
As a song of my choice.

I wish I could spend
Sometime in your heart;
Maybe I would comprehend
How much love we share apart.

And though you try to hide
How much you love me.
The fragments that reside
In your smile are there to see.

Wait, did I just say you care?
How am I even sure;
That when I'm not there
Our emotions both concur? ?

So if I ask 'do you love me? '
Would you happily give a response?
Would the answer sting like a bee! ?
Or would change the topic at once? 1

I guess someday I'll find out
And shunt the fear of the unknown.
So for now I'll let my mind shout
Till what's hidden be shown

Saturday, June 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love,optimism
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Albert Aguda 23 October 2018

I'm really grateful for your comments. They do fuel my pen.

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Naila Rais 30 June 2018

A nice write... Keep it up... Till what's hidden be shown.. Thnx for sharing... You may like to read my poems and express your views too... Naila

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 June 2018

Silence with voice is remembered with deep emotion and thought. Wonderful guess is judged with optimistic attitude. Love has brought up hidden emotion in this poem. Wonderful and excellent drafting is shared...10.

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