Near Walden Pond Poem by Martin A. Ramos

Near Walden Pond



A poet lurked for poems
in the woods near Walden Pond.
She surveyed the ground once trod
by Walden himself, and secured her traps
-imagery, metaphor, stream of consciousness-
in the most pristine places.
She recited Italian sonnets
reverently while she waited. In all
probability the poet would soon recover
a unique specimen, since she had left
absolutely nothing to chance.

Soon she captured an exotic prize.
Its plumage was peacock pretty,
luscious dark meat on the bones,
a crested, iridescent head
similar to that of a mythical beast's.
So why did she release her prey
and reset her traps? Was this poet crazy?
Not by a hair's breath.

She often mistrusted poems
that looked like trophies,
and so discarded them and tried again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hugh Cobb 03 February 2006

Martin, this is an excellent poem. There are lessons in it for all who seek perfection. Often the real perfection is in the imperfection. (Don'tcha love paradox!) Well-crafted and an advisory tale well told. Warm regards, Hugh

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