Neil's Mesmerism Poem by Devanshu Patel
Neil's Mesmerism
Awesome dear Neil....
It's really a wonderful experience;
Especially the audio of your recital!
I don't remember how many times I listened to it.
May be a kind of mesmerization occurred.
It gave my fancies an air of sailing in a large vessel,
With salty air blowing with loud roar in full force
On the large kingdom of water stretched so long
As far as my eyes could see...!
And my mind enjoying that sails….
(Of course of ideas....)
Taking me far away
From the land of my consciousness....
Deeply plunged into
The unfathomable depth of
Ocean of joy
In my heart…
Dancing with the rhythm of
Blowing air…
My breaths.
Thanks
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5/3/2024 11:25:44 PM # 1.0.0.1119
It gave my fancies an air of sailing in a large vessel, With salty air blowing with loud roar in full force On the large kingdom of water stretched so long....beautiful fantasy and a great flair of imagination on Neil's poem. thank u dear poet Devanshu. tony