No Dreams Poem by Osama Waqar

No Dreams



What would we do if we had no dreams?
No themes, no streams, no things to play
With; Darkness all and all around.

No colourful thoughts, no shining streams,
No happy hours, those bright and gay;
No listening to the cheerful sound.

Of flowers showing their natural themes,
Of water falling in to stay;
Towards nothingness, we are bound.

To lose these lively things; it seems
Is the thing to do in this young day;
In filth of veracity, we are drowned.

What would we do if we had no dreams?
No themes, no streams, no things to play
With; Darkness all and all around.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Usman Hanif 13 November 2012

Its quite good man... simple assumption and then its consequences. your flow is good :) KEEP ON WRITING, , , :) if you don't mind I'd say go a bit ahead, be more imaginative, show your uniqueness... when you write something it probably has occurred to you as a unique thought which not only inspire the reader but make him think about it in awe that yesssss it is possible, i never thought about that.

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