No Other Way Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

No Other Way

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Love me,
Let me love,
Lead me, or
Follow me,
Or get the hell out of my life.
There's no other way,
Black or white, I like no grey.
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Musings |35.11.2019|
Topic: love, ultimatum

Thursday, November 28, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
here is love at its wit's end.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 30 November 2019

No Other Way, Originally I wrote this as a couplet, which on a whim I changed into this form and to my surprise the readers/poets liked it.

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Anjandev Roy 30 November 2019

Lovely piece. Fine to read. Thank u, dear poet.anjandev roy.

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 November 2019

Thank you dear poet for reading and liking it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 November 2019

Love me or, leave me! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 November 2019

In a way, yes, love me or leave me, Thanks for visiting.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 November 2019

A powerful poem of love. Perceptive and so true. Liked reading. It.

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 November 2019

'Thanks dear poet, your feedback is uplifting, for, it was experimental.' Correction... There might be room for confusion, the above should read: Thanks dear poet, your feedback is uplifting, for, my poem was experimental.

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Aniruddha Pathak 29 November 2019

Thanks dear poet, your feedback is uplifting, for, it was experimental.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 November 2019

Lovely poem. Simple and stunning. Love is love, beautifully penned.

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Aniruddha Pathak 29 November 2019

I think simple things if made effective are always stunning. Thanks for your feedback, dear KM.

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Godhra - Gujarat
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