In the April wind, white cherry blossom;
On the ground, snowflakes.
Kenneth, yes, an improvement. I got the idea from Lenchen's weather report today... Yes, the 'rule' of leaving it to the reader to link two independent statements does stimulate the visual imagination?
Michael, A suggestion...if I may white cherry blossom rides on April winds snowflakes on the ground Either way there is a beautiful image portrayed. Great haiku! Kenneth
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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