Note Explanation Poem by Thomas Plotz

Note Explanation



I didn't mean to sound condescending, on the (Note - Poem)
With an arrogant tone, of a non-thankful address,
I was a mess, all chocked up with tears, from one of the
Voice recorded letters you wrote for me,
From skype, and the like; is a wonderful thing,
That brings your Love-one voice and image home to you,

When their off on another Tour of Duty…
Doing their job till it's done…
Waiting for you Son, Daughter, and Love-one, to come home…
As they roam, wander, and ramble the roads…
Then sent back to you, to continue the rapport as before…
It a hard separation for a family, month and years at a time…

I am having fun, Remembering the past!

I do want, to make this last…
(The Note) was about a verse I read; not the Journey of the fall.
It chocked me up, and I turned off the record letter for a while.
I don't want this to end! ! This is worthwhile to stay,
I heard what the Kids said, and for me the song birds still flies,
Just wanted to express my love and thanks, to you all…
I'm longing, to hear the call, and see you again my family,

Also I took out the last line, in the Note poem,
Making it more wholesome and less lonesome,
I put it in late, and it didn't fit for me.

Still I have the hew, of this battle strong,
Hell, I do need to Run along; to you.

T. Plotz
Note Explanation
28 July 2016

For Danielle's Fight.

Thursday, July 28, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: letter,love and life
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