Obscured Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Obscured

Rating: 5.0


Reports BBC with glee
‘that the number of
Russian soldiers died
in the war against Ukraine
is obscured, and maybe
double the official figures.

More deaths just mean
more families bereaved,
vulnerable, insecure and weak
and more children orphaned

whether Russian or Ukrainian
everyone of those who died
is a son, a brother or a father
and has left a family in tatters.

who has drawn the borders
that divides man from man?
when will greed of treason
be subdued by reason?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M. Asim Nehal 18 June 2023

The declaration of war ought to be deemed a global offense, and those who instigate it must be held accountable for their heinous actions and subjected to complete sanctions and boycotts.

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M. Asim Nehal 18 June 2023

A very thoughtful poem.

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David Wood 18 June 2023

Excellent thoughts Unnikrishnan, the last stanza says it all.

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Nabakishore Dash 19 June 2023

God created the landmass, but man drew the borders for which all of us suffer and would suffer also. Impeccable piece.

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Sando Hussam 19 June 2023

I don't belive on media reports they are puppets and nothing else. Nice points.

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D.N. Rebb 19 June 2023

Well said

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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