Ode To A Pill Poem by Cristobal Benjumea

Ode To A Pill



You that promises, terestial paradise
to you i give thee a garland of faded magenta carnations
i begin witness to nirvana, and a foamy sea
ive been playing with my instrument
untill you agreed to give me an audience
my song leaves an impression on you, neither black or white, but coloured, both beautifull or tragic, or pathetic, happy
worthy to be cut in stone for posterity, and no meer dust, but a cascade, of fresh wonder

Monday, May 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jefferson Carter 22 May 2017

Cristobal, I like that you didn't rhyme here. You do need to get a better grip on English. Too many ESL problems. Maybe read some good contemporary poetry in English? If you'd like, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Tell me what you think of it. Yrs, JC

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