Oily Poem by Preitty Nayarr

Oily

Rating: 4.5


I see that pain i see that shaft
I got no clue why you were theft(from me)
YOU might not know
I searched for u
Your life's been so coily..
You might be so oily
You slipped away from me..
I lost you like i've never been able to hold u
And i found you now it seems like i never told u
I cared my dear FOR YOU!

Wednesday, April 27, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: alone,betrayal,care,hate,lonely,love,missing
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 30 October 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Preitty. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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