To be on your mountain top
with an elevated view,
could my chances increase
for getting a glimpse of you?
Standing barefoot in your presence
before a burning bush consumed,
would your glory envelop me
as a spiritual womb?
Moses saw your backside,
but show me instead your face and eyes.
Having direct interaction with you
should cause my faith to be revised.
Conquering obstacles of Life
via a mountainous climb,
while developing a personal relationship
help makes the upward trek sublime.
May your wish come true. Lovely poem of a longing to see our Lord. Nicely written. love Ernestine XXX
WOW! ! ! This poem simply blew me away. It's awesome the way combine personal feeling with so wonderful truth. I loved this one! ! ! Beautiful, just beautiful.
Joe...A fine piece of verse, relating to Faith and the human element of ocassional Doubt...Fact is, I suppose, we'd all like a glimpse at HIS eyes, and smile of reassurance...But then thats what Faith is all about, as so I was taught back at Holy Family Grammar....Great piece...Job well done, Joe'''''''''''''''''''FJR
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Well articulated and nicely penned with spiritual insight. A fine and lofty verse.