Once Upon A Time Poem by Alice Shaw

Once Upon A Time

Rating: 4.5


Once upon a time
You were here with me
At that time I was happy
Life had a meaning
You left
You left me here
Alone
I don’t know why I should live
What’s the point?
Please send me a sign,
Let me know what I should do
Oh, I don’t know!
Maybe life never had a meaning.
But then, maybe it still does
Why isn’t it a happy ending?
Why do I die
Instead of having
Many children
And living happy forever?

Because the thing
That gives meaning to life
Is it’s own end

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marvin Brato 13 October 2006

Maybe life never had a meaning But then, maybe it still does Please start a composition with this ok, I like to see the positive side that expresses joy being alive. At your age you should see life on its positive perspective. Nevertheles, good poem, I liked it.

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Catastrophe King 04 September 2006

Your words display sadness.... but reveals the immense talent that needs a little nurture. Good work.

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