Only, If! ! Poem by Anupam anu Sharma

Only, If! !

Rating: 4.5


Only, if the sky could give me the space
and don't let me show,

Only, if the motherland could embrace me
and don't let me slow,

Only, if the wind could shake my wall
and don't let me blow,

Only, if the flowers could make me smile
and don't let me low,

Only, if the time could forgive me
and forget what i did ago,

Only, if the ocean could hold me
and don't let me go,
don't let me go! ! !

©Anupam Sharma
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Friday, June 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: sadness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 04 December 2018

Only, if the wind could shake my wall and don't let me blow, Only, if the flowers could make me smile and don't let me low, wonderful expressions in varied images about sadness. you are very creative dear poetess. thank u. tony

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Vishal Gupta 17 June 2017

This is wonderful 😊 Keep writing ✒

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Anupam Anu Sharma 17 June 2017

Thanks Vishal Gupta😊.Keep motivting.

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Jazib Kamalvi 17 June 2017

Great poetic aspirations. Thanks

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Anupam Anu Sharma 17 June 2017

Sir I feel blessed. Regards! ! !

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I love your poem Anupam and Sharma. i really enjoyed your poem. Only, if the flowers could make me smile and don't let me low I like it. Its a really nice poem

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Anupam Anu Sharma 16 June 2017

A BIG THANKS! ! ! ! !

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Anupam Anu Sharma 16 June 2017

Thank you for such an appreciation! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 June 2017

Such an interesting poem to read.... I rate it 10+++++ You may visit my IF I WRITE A POEM... Thanks, Anupam....

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Anupam Anu Sharma 16 June 2017

Sir, thank you so much for your 10+++++ appreciation.I will surely visit your creation.Regards! !

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