Open Beams. Poem by Shelley L Baxter

Open Beams.

Rating: 5.0


I want open beams in the ceiling of my mind
plenty of lights, lots of space,
maybe a shadow or two inside.
There I can swing from rung to rung
from beams of hope and of pain.
Boards of love and of loss,
fully visible each memory clear.
None of my lived days lost,
a life not lived in vain.
An open mind like a parachute,
Sky’s the limit of all earthly houses.
A ceiling that I the owner can point and show,
all because it is a life fully lived.
All comings and goings noted;
all memories reside within
the walls of my mind.

Written April 6th 2005.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvina Germain 25 January 2008

Geoff is right the imagry is fantastic, taking one to higher limits. I love the partial line 'ceiling of my mind'. Fabulous Shelley, nothing surprises me with you anymore, you are truly an excellent writer, I'm so happy you're my friend. Melvina

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Geoff Warden 24 April 2007

Wow.........Building piece by peice.....imagery is very well placed 10/10

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