Artemis Gutierrez


Open My Heart - Poem by Artemis Gutierrez

If I open my heart to you
yours will truly be broken.
All the scars I have
and the things I've seen
couldn't be spoken.
The things I saw,
I couldn't tell them all,
broke my heart.
If I open my heart to you,
which I could never do,
You wouldn't last at all
you would cry your heart up
and waste every tear,
all the happiness you have would disappear.
So you see I can't open my heart to you
or else we would all wither away.
because if I opened my heart out
you wouldn't want to stay.


Comments about Open My Heart by Artemis Gutierrez

  • Rookie - 136 Points Romeo Della Valle (9/15/2012 7:10:00 PM)

    Wow! A real reservoir of powerful words and rich imagery that clearly shows your Beauty and Talent at such a young age demonstrating your great potential in the Poetry World! 10+++ Well crafted and poignant write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! If time permits, please check out my Visual Poetry webpage: http: //www.romeodellavalle.com Let me know how you like it! God Bless You! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 13, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, September 14, 2012


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