Open Your Eyes... Poem by Victoria McBroom

Open Your Eyes...

Rating: 5.0


When we open our eyes,
We can see all the lies,
The ones we despise,
The things we deny,
The things we hate,
The one little date,
We gave them the bait,
To win the long wait,
We sent them away,
What did we say,
I knew we would pay,
For that one lonely day,
That was the light,
That started the fight,
And lasted the night.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rishav Rastogi 18 August 2009

We can see all the lies, The ones we despise, The things we deny, The things we hate technically very well connived message and very well representation of thoughts in rhythmic way...

0 0 Reply
David Harris 11 August 2009

Victoria, a poem of an affair gone wrong through outside influences. Very well done. Top marks and thanks for sharing it with us. Hugs David

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success