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OUR FATE...

she told me to leave you
and I refused
she told me not to trust you
and I ignored her
she told me you were lying
and I told her no
she said please trust me
and I let her go

but she still pleaded day and night
asking me to go to forget about you

but you told me words of love and forever
and an unbreakable bond
that no one could sever

I trusted you in the end
not believing
in my best friend

she told me you would
leave breaking my heart
I told her no we shall never part

she decided our fate in the end
me
a broken hearted girl
with a dead best friend...

Submitted: Sunday, April 19, 2009
Edited: Monday, April 20, 2009


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  • Hailey Agnew (4/26/2009 4:30:00 PM)

    thats good i read this on your recommendation and it's really good, relatable.

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  • ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (4/20/2009 12:45:00 AM)

    a touching poem wonderfully penned

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