Our Love Will Carry On Poem by Rachel Harris

Our Love Will Carry On

Rating: 5.0


Early in the morning
When dew's upon the grass
The first bird sings
Calling others to mass
Golden sun shines down
Everything is clear
As the world awakens
Dawn wipes away fear
In my heart is peace
Unbroken save by thoughts
Wishing you were here
To share my quiet spots
The day grows slowly on
And the sun rises high
A gentle breeze caresses
Yet from me emits a sigh
Looking over browned hills
I long for you by my side
My daydreams are filled with you
From them, I cannot hide
Your love is ever-present
Even when the sun goes down
Even whilst cool darkness surrounds
Even as sky hides her golden crown
As I lay my body to rest
You're never far from me
I feel your love miles away
In dreams, you I see
Together with me, forever
Our love is unbreakable
We cannot fall alone
Together, never incapable

Forever, our love will carry on

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Steve Hagget 16 September 2006

I like this very much - a really good poem and very well written, you have a real talent, Steve

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 16 September 2006

Salir>>>A splendored pieceof Verse, here...Stellar use of imagery....crisp, tight structure...fluxion rhythm & rhyme throughout....A Fine Penning''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Ebone' Ingram 15 September 2006

this is great. i envy you because i can't rhyme to save my life. but whatever, this is awesome. keep it up, buddy eni da kid

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Geoff Warden 10 September 2006

A beautiful poem full of passion......................

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Glaedr the poet 08 September 2006

Silence can be bliss when in the company of your significant other :)

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