Our Separation In This While Poem by Tia Maria

Our Separation In This While

Rating: 5.0


The sweetest feeling
reading thoughts from you
Our separation in this while
Is so very hard to do

This does not mean
you are not in my head
As I scroll over in this time
all that you have said

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynda Robson 24 October 2008

A lovely piece Tia, it is hard to be seperated, but just think how wonderful it will be when you get together, Well versed, Lynda xx

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Sathyanarayana M V S 24 October 2008

I always liked the way u present things. Simple yet so effective.....we have to learn a lot from ur technique....10

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 24 October 2008

All that I have said, but my dear wait until I really get started.. Andy xx

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Ency Bearis 24 October 2008

sweet things always remembered...verses implied...A10 Ency Bearis

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David Threadgold 24 October 2008

Hi Tia. I like the reference to scroll over. great read as always. well done 10/10 Regards Dave T

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