Over-Tightening Poem by Kassem Oude

Over-Tightening



Over-tightening becomes loose
Likely the pressured will resist
The screw its helices may lose
Limited endurance does exist

A vehicle moves in high speed
It is stubborn, out of control
It might die or too much bleed
So would fail the mission goal

A mom gives too much remarks
And requests and asks galore
Kids become deaf, refuse tasks
They hide away, start to roar

When hard restrictions are applied
People resort to cheat and tricks
Farther toward evil they'll glide
On attic stocked dead the ethics

Whoever close to your heart
Your whole might you offer to
Yet he still turns from you apart
What you think you should do?

Kassem Oude
Thursday, September 7,2017

Thursday, September 7, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: happiness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 18 February 2018

Wow a superb poem, ESP liked the stanzas about kids attitudes. Fantastic rhyming way u said it all. Allegory metaphor crafted swell too. Kudos. Pleez do comment my latest newest poem too titled song of lunar lovers

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