Pain Poem by Tasha Hunter

Pain

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Pain seeps through my haert
ice clenches my blood
I'm heading into darkness
feeling the world around me disapear

Happy memories begin to fade
being replaced by a ritch dispare
a push on a swing so happy and kind
turns to a push to the ground so sad and lonley

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Robles 12 August 2008

Surely you in your mind exist pleasant memories. Why not write about them? Good memories are so pleasing to hear, and if they make you cry of joy, your tears will surely wash away the memories that make you sad.

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Crystal Garcia 11 April 2008

i really like this poem! ! you are a very talented writter! ! you express alot of your fellings! !

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