Pain Poem by miranda sarlund

Pain



Pain is like a blade piercing threw your heart

No mater how hard you try it doesn't go away

It makes you scream it makes you cry some times it even makes you want to die

And no matter what you do it never goes away

It just sits there in your heart waiting for you to crack

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 23 February 2009

Yes. That is the pain of a broken heart. It stays with you. The only problem I have with this piece is the line spacings. There should be no spacings. It really disrupts the reading. GW62

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Jacob Courtney 11 January 2009

you speak of pain in your heart. Yes it does just sit there for all time never healing never going away. very good job.

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