Pain Poem by Elizabeth Fletcher

Pain

Rating: 4.0


Life hurts.
Death hurts.
Is there any in between?

I can feel myself slipping...
Feel me breaking
At the seams.

Just promise me there is a place
Where the world is finally clean,
And I can't feel anything.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zainab Zaheen 12 June 2011

the title says it all. very well written.. keep it up

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James Coughlin 09 June 2011

I like this poem. Keep writing. You will find your 'clean place, ' and good feelings :)

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