Pathetic! Poem by Edward Kofi Louis
Pathetic!
Life is pathetic at times!
But seek for peace than war;
Living on earth,
You and i! !
Let us love each other and,
Care for each other;
Insults! ! !
Hatred and war will NEVER bring us peace.
In your land,
In my land,
Works of mankind on earth;
Always with positive morals than with lies! !
Why hate yourself?
Why hate your neighbour? ! !
Think!
Think twice;
We are all human beings.
We were created on earth to learn,
Following after righteous laws! !
Following after righteous morals,
Peace and love to all mankind without racism!
The earth needs peace,
Human Beings needpeace!
Sharing with each other is better than hatred and war.
Why go against people on 'Poem Hunter'?
Calling yourself, "Pathetic";
Are you afraid to bring out your NAME? ! !
Yes! You saw my name and you insulted me;
You readmy poem and you insulted me;
Is it the way that you were brought up by your teachers? !
Then, YOU LACK POSITIVE MORALS.
I am for peace; and, Yahweh Almighty is my Guide. Learning through The House Of Yahweh.
With righteous teachers,
Teaching the truth! !
With righteous morals,
With hatred and war;
Peace be with you!
As you call yourself, "Pathetic".
Facing the people who always write in to insult others. People using the advantage of Poem Hunter to destroy others. Thanks for your commet on my poem. Stay blessed always.
A very forceful write. But as to the reference to PH, I have hardly seen any adverse (forget hateful) comments. And I think some positive criticism when due is a good avenue for improvement, not goody, goody, wishy washy comments. But I may be wrong. I liked the poem, though this genre is beyond me.
Positiveness! ! Peace and love to all mankind! ! ! With righteous morals. Thanks for your comment on my poem.
Positiveness! ! Peace and love to all mankind! ! ! With righteous morals. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/29/2024 4:37:55 AM # 1.0.0.1119
A very positive write. You are absolutely right, we should always seek peace. An amazing piece weaved by a kind heart.10