Pearly Droplets - Tanka, Senryu Poem by Seema Jayaraman

Pearly Droplets - Tanka, Senryu

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Pearly droplets
Perched on curved lashes
Orphaned words
Of a bludgeoned heart
Veil a departing sun
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@seemakj24

Wednesday, January 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: tears
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 08 January 2016

Facing nature with the problems of life. Nice work.

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Seema Jayaraman 15 January 2016

Thank you Edward..

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Seema Jayaraman 14 January 2016

Thank you Edward, happy you liked..

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Rajnish Manga 06 January 2016

Words working their magic to create a wonderful landscape in the backdrop of sunset. Thanks a lot, Seema ji.

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Seema Jayaraman 15 January 2016

Thank you Rajnishji..

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Seema Jayaraman 14 January 2016

Thank you Rajnishji, glad you enjoyed..

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