Ph: Poetry Writing: Surfing Memories Poem by Brian Johnston

Ph: Poetry Writing: Surfing Memories



Although good lines are not accidents
How I love to surf an old memory that
Floats into consciousness, a fall colored leaf,
With hues never seen before, its heart exposed,
Drifting past my car along an earthen curb
That is transient too, and new rain erodes with time.
Magical images, dearer for distance perhaps,
But headed for oblivion non-the-less,
Like a love that only one heart still remembers.

Ah! It is good to be old, with so much treasure,
Even if I am the only one left who can touch it,
Feel its heft, or judge its impact on future lives.
October's rain has cleaned the air and
The decaying leaves in the gutter smell sweet,
Okay with the cycles of life that engulf them.
I swirl the cut tea in the bottom of my cup,
And wait expectantly for the future they predict,
Knowing, trusting, feeling all is well!

Brian Johnston
January 5,2018

Wednesday, February 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: reflections
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 28 February 2018

Loved the poem, Brian. One line really surprised me at first: Ah! It is good to be old, and then I read the rest of the line, and I understood. We really do have treasures in our memories and the things we have learned in life. Well done, and I doubt you are as old as I am!

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