Poem 993 Poem by Billy Loving

Poem 993



Falling from it's nest
A desperate, hopping chick
Unable to fly
Chirps loudly for it's mother
The sound, unnerving to me

Tuesday, October 18, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: bird,hopelessness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 18 October 2016

Yes, its terrible, like some lost, desperate victim of a war. You have conveyed the sentiment very well.

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