***poetic Suicide*** Poem by Ian Bowen

***poetic Suicide***

Rating: 2.7


The poem
under the magnetic penguin
on the fridge door
will explain everything
in excellent English.
In fact,
it has been checked
by experts on writing sites,
who pointed out mistakes
and suggested other options
to my line breaks.
I placed it under the genre heading
of miscellaneous, and
used the metaphor
of a broken man.
Hope you will like the alliterations;
‘taken twenty two tablets’.
‘hope heaven heals hearts’
Perhaps you will enjoy
the play on words
I used for my ending and this
farewell note.
‘Life is not cheap’
‘Good buy! ’

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