The earth has a great gift for love,
But the sky! The sky’s merciless.
Immortality of the earth is the grass,
Immortality of the sky – a verse.
I agree with Lime and Tequila below on the sky line........ Another great poem Tsira! Rogerx
beautiful piece. caugh my eyes cause I have on by the same name. glimpse it.
immortality of verse is sky there to watch your soul soar and fly to the hot heights of living coal mined in your person's goal
Immortality of the sky – a verse. that never end that transcended love that erected taught
Yes I do believe that verses are liberated into the sky and thus take on another dimension; The act of wrting thoughts down gives form to your thinking. Nice thoughtful poem, and succint.
I read your 'Poetry' just now.I can appreciate you better through your poems. This is a lovely poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The second line, the sky as merciless, makes this poem for me. I never thought of the sky in that term before, but your poem gave me a new way of seeing.