Praying For Our Troops Poem by Paul McCormick

Praying For Our Troops

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Our Troops need hope
While we cope
Fighting there way
Holding terrorist at bay

help protect the ones
that are left alone
Don't let them down
Soon they'll be home bound

Always Sending our love
While praying to the angels above

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 09 September 2007

Unfortunately, it appears patriotism when it comes to holding serve til we get the job done, [regardless if there were errs & unexpected roadblocks], is not of much popularity.But we are there...Some good men and women soldiers are not, as they died fighting for our freedom, and are reason why we have not been attacked since 09/11...We must see this through if we are to remain the worlds most dominant force...We must see it through, for the likes of N. Korea, Iran, and possibly even Putin's Russia to muse on before challenging us.....We will not be shaken and run out on a promise of total victory.We never have...We cannot start now...Very nice penning, Paul...The couplet stanzaec construction works well here. ~ FjR ~

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