The great traveller
Has travelled extensively,
He has seen many things.....
Important and unimportant
In course of his journey,
The eminent traveller becomes very pleased,
At night he falls asleep,
Then he sees an obscure line
In his vision,
It teases him continuously,
Finally he listens some precious words within,
'You have seen many things,
But you have never seen yourself,
So you are a failure in your life.'
Loved the last stanza of your very beautifully crafted poem.
Dear Anjandev, i like these travellers in your poems who are constantly striving to discover the inner beauty.
That was a rewarding poem to read---beautifully and poetically expressed and a wise wake-up call to us all--- a billion stars for this and a fav
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Yes, one must carefully listen to the precious words within.....very nice expression.