Pretty Moon — Same Rhyme Of Spring Moon Of My Poetry Friend, Luo Zhihai Poem by Luo Zhihai

Pretty Moon — Same Rhyme Of Spring Moon Of My Poetry Friend, Luo Zhihai

惠月——步罗志海诗友《春月》韵

妙笔惊蟾月
新诗荡惠风
月明飘颢气
心惠逸云情

译者注:月惠两个字,错开重复,是合理重字的一种新形式。罗志海写作《春月》时不经意忽然想到错开重复合理重字这种新形式。在这里,罗志海感谢绿艾苑以和诗的形式,选了月惠两个字,错开重复,也写了对联体诗。

格律体新诗 ● 五绝绿艾苑作罗志海译
第11164首对联体诗 2020年12月18日


Pretty Moon — Same Rhyme Of 《Spring Moon》Of My Poetry Friend, Luo Zhihai

A wonderful pen scares the toad moon
The new poetry and the pretty breeze are floating
Moon is bright and the fresh, pure and grand air is floating
Heart is pretty and the cloud feeling is floating

Metric New Poetry ● Five Words of Quatrain by Lǜaiyuan, Translation by Luo Zhihai
The 11,164th Two Pairs of Couplets,12/18/2020


附原玉:春月 文/罗志海

春月

诗成惊朗月
梦醒醉春风
月色乡村味
新春故里情

Friday, December 18, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: moon,spring,wind
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Luo Zhihai

Luo Zhihai

Haifeng / Shanwei / Guangdong / China
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