Vishal Sharma

Rookie - 184 Points (10th july 1996/Samastipur (Bihar) / India)

**princess** - Poem by Vishal Sharma

the princess no matter how old
shines in silver, worth in gold
i am confident, as i am told
by those who came after her behold
the reign was sweet and gain
since no one was there in pain
all were leading life in a way
whether it was night or a day
the princess no matter how old
shines in silver worth in gold.

kingdom and subjects all were her
she tried hard for this to occur
as she was not herself a caged pegion
she did not allow this in her region
she has got a big and selfless heart
subjects do not want herself to part
her promise and arts and skills
she on reign, father on pills
now she had to take a responsibility
and the coming time would check her ability.


Comments about **princess** by Vishal Sharma

  • Rookie ~ Jenie~ (6/12/2013 6:49:00 AM)

    great rhyming
    words are appropirate
    idea is fresh
    what else is needed now. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (6/11/2013 8:51:00 AM)

    cute dedication to an unknown....very effective in nature, as composed by fine imagery, flow of rhythm & rhyme.
    a poetic art indeed (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 348 Points Poetheart Morgan (6/11/2013 7:36:00 AM)

    Very strong Poet! ! ! And well written! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 213 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (6/10/2013 3:01:00 PM)

    Great poem young friend.
    Keep it up.
    Siya_! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,349 Points Unwritten Soul (6/6/2013 6:02:00 AM)

    I think this is a special poem if you write to someone, uplifting poem, beautiful and nice imagery accompanied along the lines, very nice effort! _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Divya Gupta (6/6/2013 2:14:00 AM)

    Wow! A lovely poetry.. Beauty lies in heart.. U Potraid his beauty in wordngs..lykd it a lot! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 120 Points Persian Khushi (6/6/2013 2:01:00 AM)

    Brilliant! ! Excellent rhyming too. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Andhy Shakespeare (6/4/2013 8:55:00 AM)

    Nice rhyme, Vishal! Do what you can do.. Never stop writing! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 4, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, August 24, 2013


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