Promise When Veiled Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Promise When Veiled

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Promise when veiled
Love is a shadow of the time
As mystic as moon or the mist
glistening blush of the red rose
as deep and dark yet the divine.

as I promise to unveil the flairs
impaling the hurtful tears whamming
when reasoned to the pain inflicting
as tempered by the wharf of sorrow

like whining away the darkness
from the clouds of black bellowing
reflecting the whiteness of the sky
yet blue azure as revered by the sun

lest the light may touch the grimed
to warm up the green flitting the glooms
into the fire flaming them blustered
when curved most hurtful deep down.

as love is a mystery bristling gleams
like drops of dews carrying glimpse
flitting stint of the moon over the sands
through the hours of the night veiled yet
even across the darkness in resilience

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ewigi Liebe 21 October 2007

A very nice promise...love as mystery....whatever comes for someone who^d make away...dreams come true......full of hope nothing less than an answer. another one of my favorite. thanks for sharing, Mary :)

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Patrice James 20 October 2007

this is a very nice promise, nice penned...thanks for sharing.

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Thad Wilk 19 October 2007

A nice smooth flow to this poem, enjoyable reading! (10) ! Thad

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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