Prove Your Love On Me [part I] Poem by Renssey Heart Vine

Prove Your Love On Me [part I]

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It's difficult, I can't decide;
If I'll give up or I would fight
For I was hurt and I am tired
Of the promises that you would change

I haven't see how you love me
And haven't feel you fight for me
But all I hear into your words
The promises that you wont let go

Where are those things you have told me?
That you wont cheat; just only me
But now I know that you had lie
There's another girl aside from me

I felt so bad, oh! I'ts so hard
I gave you all the chance and love
But you have done the same mistakes
What have I done? Did I've do wrong?

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this poem on august 24,2012.It is when i know that my bf cheated on meI was hurt and broken.So i wrote what i really feel through poetry.-hOpe you Like it-
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 30 November 2019

Well articulated and nicely brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Vine.

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Renssey Heart Vine 02 October 2012

yes i will, . and i would be thankful for him, because he is the the reason why i discover myself written a poet.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 02 October 2012

I feel sorry for you, RHV and this poem is too sad, but we don't have to be unhappy remembering someone else misdoing! so be cheerful!

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