Puddle Or Ocean? Poem by Luz Hanaii

Puddle Or Ocean?

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Some poems are so deep,
when I first read
I only wet my feet
but not till I dive deep
my heart becomes enthralled

I question if the water's deep
or I've sunk low, submerged,
immersed, profound my self again
within a puddle, not an ocean

Saturday, February 2, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: poems,reading,wonder
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Riza Braholli 09 February 2019

Luz I dive deep in this poem like in the ocean... congratulations by dr. Riza

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Luz Hanaii 09 February 2019

Riza, thank you much for your comment.

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Prabir Gayen 05 February 2019

Beautiful...i must quote: : : : I question if the water's deep or I've sunk low, submerged, immersed, profound my self again within a puddle, not an ocean

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Luz Hanaii 05 February 2019

Thank you for reading and commenting.

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