Quest Poem by Prabir Gayen

Quest

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Quest
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Where is thy flute the music!
Where, O supreme Soul The Heart,
Tingle thy light in the morning breeze,
Resonates In the soft cooing of bird,
Thy flute and thy call do I invoke,
Spread my pierced ears to hold.

The deepest is the attachment; O Dear,
From morning till night mind roams,
The beauty of spring to winter's spear,
The darkness is adamant to vamoose,
Pain like painted maze hugs my soul; sheer,
To thy glory do I look to break chain huge.

This little flute of mine the frail keel,
For years is with no single rhyme,
Sound of variant discord, the Will,
Deceived in believing the world mundane,
With deep Scathe in heart onto thy sill,
For your boon waiting in the empty shell of mine.

Thy pity is deep, eternal and love ineffable,
In every step of life thou embrace with thy reed,
Only bemused is my mind with pixelated choice,
Inordinate is the desire and Caitiff becomes my mind,
Thy flute is deep and never forgets to invoice,
With the waves, birds and beast flower and
Wind.

In the dark corner of my mind thou sit,
With the little flute making tune of mine,
Through blood and vain thou breathe; instant,
In the heart the music beats with grace,
Song flows with no inane space; constant,
Only my face is synthetic with deaf Hypotenuse.
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Quest
Tuesday, January 15, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life love devotion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 16 January 2019

Thy pity is deep, eternal and love ineffable, In every step of life thou embrace with thy reed, Only bemused is my mind with pixelated choice, Inordinate is the desire and Caitiff becomes my mind, Thy flute is deep and never forgets to invoice, With the waves, birds and beast flower and Wind- - - - - - -God's love ripples through the universe - - A deeply spiritual write, thanks for sharing.

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Prabir Gayen 16 January 2019

Very thankful dear poetess...Didi...

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 16 January 2019

Thy poetry may not be understood by LORD JI reduce thee's and thou's he vows and see him with Indianised eyes he is IS-CON guy the worldly master please him will thee de robe thyself of alll the SHAKESPEAREAN thesaurus and hear his flute loudly as my deaf ears also do HARE RAMA HARE KRISHNA KRISHNA HARE HARE SAY AGAIN TILL YOU CAN ALSO HEAR POET IN THE ME HARE KRISHNA JI of our future years to be ye will be remember me a human god came to save me yesterday as I nearly fell ..... PG

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Rudra Mondal 09 June 2020

Where is thy flute the music! Where, O supreme Soul The Heart, Tingle thy light in the morning breeze,

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Bri Edwards 18 January 2019

(cont.) 2. i like rhyming, but sometimes will forego rhyming here and there if it strains my poem too much. bri (:

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Bri Edwards 18 January 2019

1. Hypotenuse comes from the Greek word hypoteinousa which means stretching under. ....it is a math term. how are you using it? i don't usually Use, don't sometimes Recognize, and don't always Appreciate symbolism, though many 'eat it up' i think, and it can be useful and poetic. i also don't understand use of invoice; i thought you might mean invoke. The poem SOUNDS nice, but i don't exactly get the meaning; i LIKE to 'get the meaning'. (cont.)

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Prabir Gayen 18 January 2019

Invoice is used here as to listen to..inner respond....

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Prabir Gayen 18 January 2019

Hypotenuse is used as ears...I mean listening faculty.

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Meethi Mondal 17 January 2019

In the dark corner of my mind thou sit, With the little flute making tune of mine, Through blood and vain thou breathe; instant, In the heart the music beats with grace, Song flows with no inane space; constant, Only my face is synthetic with deaf Hypotenuse. ...........very awesome expression

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Meethi Mondal 17 January 2019

This little flute of mine the frail keel, For years is with no single rhyme, Sound of variant discord, the Will, ......mucicaliity..

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