Pintu Mahakul

Veteran Poet - 2,927 Points (Gandam, Deogarh district, Odisha, India)

Quintessence in Quick Link

Quickly we fall in trap of negative chat,
Quick rise of pressure hurts the heart.
Costume makes a man really very smart,
Eagerly plays on stage nicely his part.

While time crosses soul falls in vice,
While drought comes, does not get rice.
Hot sun rays fall cause melt in ice,
Before action we should think twice or thrice.

Many times vices put us in danger,
Let us watch like in forest watches ranger.
We should show sympathy also to stranger,
We should be always true God's messenger.

Quintessence in sudden we can gain,
We can throw away far unseen pain.
If we can get God's mercy bless rain,
We can develop on rails as runs a train.

Super meditation with God is right path,
Also we can do work remaining on earth.
God is our saviour of birth after birth,
Quintessence in quick link is our girth.

Submitted: Monday, August 25, 2014
Edited: Tuesday, August 26, 2014

Topic of this poem: Spirituality


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Poet's Notes about The Poem

Commonly human soul falls in trap of negative energy very quickly rather than positive matters. It is just like quick rise of pressure in heart that hurts a lot. While a man wears costume looks very smart and he plays his part very eagerly. Soul also plays his part on earth surface by body as a costume. Due to cross of time a soul gradually falls in trap of vice. Like while drought comes a man does not get rice to eat, while vice acquires soul does not able to recognize the value of life. While sun rays fall ice melts. While vice falls on soul spoils his qualities leaving his originality and falls in danger. As a ranger watches and protects the forest, a soul should protect him. We all should show sympathy even to a stranger being the messenger of God. To recover from vice it is essential that quick quintessence is required in time. This is possible while we will link with God. We will able to perceive mercy and bless of his and gain quintessence in sudden or rapidly we can develop for this as a train runs on rails. For this purpose super meditation is only the right path, which can be done during work on earth every day. For birth after birth only God is our true saviour and brings us in quick quintessence with his link. This poem is based on such theme. This is written on special occasion in Brahmapur, Odisha, India and dedicated to the people of the world.

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