Racing Thoughts Poem by Lawerence Mize, Sr.

Racing Thoughts

Rating: 5.0


He was sitting on the floor
Back to the wall
Legs spread out
Quiet, not answering my call
I looked around
Nothing looked amiss
The trail in the dust
Led to where he sit
His hands were unmoving
Laying by his side
Face slack, eyes open, chest still
I knew he had died
I Thought of 'Butch, ' a friend from long ago
As I walked today
My mind was racing
With thoughts not pleasant to say
Butch popped into my head
And I relived that day
An old man on a walk
With thoughts that get in the way

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Thoughts of finding my dead friend a long time ago stayed with me on my walk. Felt so sad when I got home.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Smoky Hoss 16 August 2021

Moving words; powerful in the simplicity of straight forward humanity. Excellent.

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Lawerence Mize, Sr.

Lawerence Mize, Sr.

Baltimore, Maryland
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