Asper Reynolds


Rain - Poem by Asper Reynolds

When it's raining no one asks the sky if it's alright
No one gently chides it and tells it to be bright
When it's grey and cloudy no one says the sky is just an attention hog
Not evenwhen everything becomes consumed in fog
No one takes it personally when lightning strikes and thunder rolls

But when the rain dries and the sun burns with no relief
Everyone shares the sky's grief


Comments about Rain by Asper Reynolds

  • Rookie - 376 Points Sina Farajzadeh (12/30/2014 1:30:00 PM)

    Hi. The last lines are touching. I like your theme.
    Nice job.
    Well I also wrote a poem aboout man's negligence of nature (Modern Life) I hope you like it.
    Thanks (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 376 Points Sina Farajzadeh (12/30/2014 1:29:00 PM)

    Hi. The last lines are touching. I like your theme.
    Nice job.
    Well I also wrote a poem aboout man's negligence of nature (Modern Life) I hope you like it.
    Thanks (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 126 Points Elias Uddin (7/2/2014 5:29:00 AM)

    But when the rain dries and the sun burns with no relief
    Everyone shares the sky's grief.

    Yes, I agree. It's true to me. I like rain very much and I always miss it; s absence. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 13, 2014



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